You have bought furniture from a store. When you received there were some damages.
Write a letter to the manager.
- inform him about the furniture
- explain the damage
- ask the manager to do something
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the new dining table I had purchased from your shop yesterday. It is a large table with 6 seats and it is made of pure wood with no glass on the top. I was looking for a unique, heavily carved table for my dining area and I had purchased it on your demanded price without any bargain as the table perfectly matched my requirements.
However, unfortunately when we received the table through freight services; we found it broken from one side and also top area polish was faded. In addition to this one chair seat cover is dirty and seemed to be in use already. I am quite sure the original table which was shown to us has been replaced with the provided one while uploading in the cargo van.
As I have already paid for additional freight charges, so I want you to pick the broken table from my place and send a fresh one, with no additional cost. This was my first experience shopping with you that ended on a bad note. Keeping the customer satisfaction in mind, I expect you to change the table at priority. Looking forward to your swift response on this.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam
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| 2018-11-12 | Zeeq1982 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able perfectly matched my requirements. However, unfortunately when we received ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ift response on this. Yours Sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47169811321 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53044825818 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4427133126 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783982457149 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306060629133 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339417428156 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571540145311 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317630412933 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.