Sports are most fascinating game in all over the world. However, I personally beleive that, team sports are always useful for physical health instead lack of mental disablity. It is a best learning program for coordination, mutual understanding and fellowship.
On the first hand, nowadays, we realize that, most of the people are self independence, they does not like interferon to anyone. Eventually they avoid social gathering. In my opinion, team and group sports are the best option to connect with people, play in team mean you can easily reliance to each other. It gives you motivation, competition and you can complled with each other.
Furthermore, if we talk about children evolution. So, I think sports are help to enchance their physical ability. They are more active day by day. Moreover, the sense of competition mounting their learning skills. they doesnot learn only sports but they are also take spitful decision. They actual realize the humanity, help to others and patience.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, sports are best exercise to group activity. Even the famous writer said that, if you want early goal so walk alone, or if you want long term growth so walk with team.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rld. However, I personally beleive that, team sports are always useful for physic...
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Suggestion: the
...instead lack of mental disablity. It is a best learning program for coordination,...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to program'
Suggestion: to program
...mental disablity. It is a best learning program for coordination, mutual understanding ...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... the people are self independence, they does not like interferon to anyone. Eventual...
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Suggestion: They
...etition mounting their learning skills. they doesnot learn only sports but they are ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...not learn only sports but they are also take spitful decision. They actual realize t...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...utshell, I pen down saying that, sports are best exercise to group activity. Even the fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99507389163 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61312289596 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1513089417 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131419061647 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400697683501 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357483913116 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789098490539 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249983559825 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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