Some People Think That It Is Better To Choose Friends Who Always Have The Same Opinion As Them
Friends are integral part of our life. We choose friends from our primary school to university, later in work and it will go on throughout different phases of life cycle. Several people believe friends with similar thought process is good choice whereas other people say it is wise to have friends who has different views in certain circumstance. I completely agree on the latter statement and this essay will discuss my opinions with valid arguments and examples.
First and foremost, especially younger generation feel and form friendship among people who has the same sort of thoughts. Additionally, young person does not have much responsibilities during their school education apart from studies. For instance, some young people say eating at international outlet is sign of modernization which can’t be afford from a student who comes from poor background. This is one of the examples how students choose their friendship. To prove that, Stanford University had done many surveys on relationship among college students and the result shows that 70% of person connect and make friends based on the monetary status and same thoughts.
On the other hand, certain people believe discussion and disagreement in relationship brings new ideas and suggestion. Every individual has own identify and unique talents in their desired area. Furthermore, this is the crucial phase of their life to accept difference of opinion to learn and understand their limits and conquer the unknown side. Parents and teachers are the key persons to teach their students from the school. To exemplify, debate and group discussion from the childhood will help children to get register in mind to accept the non-agreement matters.
To conclude, to some extent choosing people with same views make the relationship strong whereas friends with multiple views will help to identify your limits and expand the knowledge.
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Suggestion: many
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, whereas, apart from, for instance, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34219269103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7771542906 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6798521111 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231733106565 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684666105343 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586042160917 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14226586863 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638733791815 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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