Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It has always been a debate about whether children should attend mixed schools or single-sex ones. Although single-sex schools have their own merits, I believe that the benefits of attending mixed schools weigh more.
Some people are of the opinion that boys and girls should go to separate schools because of two main reasons. Firstly, in single-sex schools, there is less distraction compared to mixed ones, causing children to focus more in class and on their courses. Being attracted to the opposite sex is a natural instinct among human beings, which may distract students from their main purpose at schools and studying efficiently. Secondly, boys and girls have different learning needs, requiring particular techniques of teaching for each sex. For instance, most of the females prefer discussion-based learning, while boys tend to group-based teamwork learning. This style of teaching and learning can only be reached in single-sex schools, where teachers can decide how to teach based on the gender.
on the other hand, I believe that mixed schools provide pupils with lifetime lessons, such as having great relationships with their opposite-sex peers and respect them despite their gender. Learning and working together in mixed schools, children become familiar with their opposite-sex counterparts’ characteristics, leading them to have good relationships in the future. For example, my friend Alice, who had attended a mixed school when she was a student, has more relationship skills with men rather than my other friends who had not attended mixed-schools. At the same time, by going yo mixed schools, students learn that there is no difference between males and females, and they should respect each other based on their personality rather than gender. Unfortunately, in Iran, there is a huge gap between different genders, due to learning from an early age that men and women are different and they cannot attend the same schools.
In conclusion, attending mixed schools or single-sex ones have their own merits, and demerits and people have different ideas which one is better. Single-sex schools lessen distractions and improve focus on a particular style of teaching based on the gender, while I believe that mixed schools cause children to improve in their future relationships, and respect to opposite-sex as well.
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Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39673913043 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87542632657 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.459684067 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.4 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202182503113 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814656918912 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542516327893 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128126356483 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405293999036 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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