It is believed that some people prefer boys and girls to study in different schools. Whereas, some think it is beneficial if girls and boys study in the same school. In my opinion it is important for children to attend a co-ed school as it will be helpful for them in the long run.
Firstly, if boys and girls are sent to separate schools it creates a safe environment, specially for girls. This makes them more open and comfortable in sharing their views and thoughts. In addition, their privacy is protected from boys and vice versa. They inculcate the habit of discipline and learn to respect each other. Counter to belief they have stronger bonds and can partake in any sports or cultural activities without any gender inequality.
Secondly, if children are sent to a mixed school they learn to work together and shoulder responsibilities irrespective of the gender. Additionally, this helps them to interact with each other without having any preconceived notions or prejudices. This attitude therefore, helps them when they grow up and take up a job.
Certain people might have reservations about sending their children to a co-ed school, however, values of equality and respect to all should be imparted to them from a young age. Therefore, in conclusion, I believe that girls and boys that attend mixed schools benefit in having a better foundation and brighter future.
- You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your lettercorrect the information in the articleexplain why it is import 89
- You recently returned by plane from an overseas trip. When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline.In your letter: say when and where you lost your hand luggage describe the bag and 73
- Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work.1. Apologise for missing the meeting.2. Explain what happened.3. Say what you will do to compensate.Write not less than 150 words. 78
- When families have a meal together it is considered social activity. Do you think eatingtogether is important to people in your country? 84
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00432900433 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74333208971 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3779455949 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250632337688 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974844015065 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11176787213 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153931220965 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985662945385 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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