Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to an article recently published in your newspaper about a new cooking program on TV. The article was written in a very bad taste. It has been airing on TV for only a week and it seems unfair to pass a judgement so soon. Gordon Ramsay, the host of the show may come across as rude, however, his cooking style and recipes are very innovative.
Let me explain in detail why I like the program. Being a chef myself we look up to Gordon Ramsay as our inspiration. Although, cooking requires a lot of hard-work and patience, he makes it easy by giving cooking tips and tricks. Also, children being fussy eaters we need to think of new recipes every time we try to feed them something healthy. Personally, I enjoy this show a lot.
I would therefore like to request you to please take some action regarding the article. Although, I respect your opinion, it is not appropriate to write only negative reviews. Being one of the top newspapers in the country people can form a wrong opinion.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Fiona D'souza
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6368159204 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52164707929 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696517412935 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.074540177 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5714285714 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241151319744 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659454432387 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746698056115 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126363606589 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059581923438 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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