Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs Do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Nowadays, people are extremely career-oriented and they attempt to explore different career options in their life. While some individuals prefer to stay in the same career because of job insecurity or fear of losing a job, few prefer changing it due to financial gain and the opportunity to learn new skills. I definitely agree with the notion that a person should change their career for once in life and explore a totally different job.
People always fear losing their job. They are justifiably worried about being fired from their current role for non-performance. For instance, during career change candidates have zero experience in the latest field so it takes some time to build their command on that job. Moreover, during the probation period, there are chances of termination as a result of not performing in the new role. Therefore, many individuals are even reluctant to try new fields to maintain their position in their old role.
Despite the minor risk of job loss, a person should explore a different career in their lifetime. Many reasons support this argument. Firstly, a career change can create more income and more avenues for success as experience adds to the knowledge base. One clear example is Elon Musk who has built his fortune from totally unrelated domains, such as, SpaceX which deals with satellites, and Tesla that deals with automobiles. Secondly, a career change brings an opportunity to learn a new skill and increases your expertise so that you become more employable. Finally, according to neuroscientists, the change is beneficial for the brain as new neural pathways are created when trying something contrasting. Overall, the job change will have a positive impact on society by increasing the willingness of people to contribute and learn.
This essay argued that people who are against career change have a limited understanding of vocation and underestimate the benefits of increased income and skill enhancement as a result of switching occupations. In conclusion, although choosing only one employment might provide job security to some extent, having different work experiences would add a plethora of benefits such as career enhancements, interesting learning opportunities, and excellent monetary returns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32773109244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94093102884 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577030812325 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6755766785 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.882352941 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346984593653 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116408024717 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083947956034 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217807229136 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766377035 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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