Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that it is beneficial for people in senior management to have a higher pay-scale as compare to other employees of a company. I completely agree with this notion because workers employed as senior managers have more responsibility and this brings a sense of competition among workers.
To begin with, senior managers have added responsibilities in comparison to other workers. That is to say that when people are employed at a top post they just do not have to fulfill their own responsibilities, but to make sure if other workers in organisation are doing their tasks appropriately. They are the one who represents company at a higher level, and make all strategies and take all big decisions which involve a lot of risks because if anything goes wrong they would be the one to lose their job, For example, report published by the Times of India states that a senior manager has 10 times more responsibility than an associate.
Another reason for my viewpoint is that higher salaries at higher positions motivate employees to be competitive. This is because higher salary attracts people to work harder and to be the best they can possibly be in. The drive to earn promotion and to fulfill their dreams boosts their work ethic. As a result, when employees perform better, ultimately, company do well in the market and gain profit. For instance, research done by Cambridge University concluded that higher salary is the primary factor that motivates employees to work hard at their job and compete with their colleagues.
In conclusion, I agree that it is a good thing for the employees employed at top positions to get higher salaries than the other workers because they have added responsibility and the difference in pay-scale motivates other employees to be competitive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
... to work harder and to be the best they can possibly be in. The drive to earn promotion and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02675585284 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94183613394 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498327759197 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0947683425 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299540237032 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126059841491 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862432576419 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211596284601 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652394328921 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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