Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The each person always need to communication with other persons. As we know it, since onset the communication it has been necessary for everybody. Therefore the individuals always keeping touch witch each other. The reason it’s not vital for have a friend. The vital point is have a modern and indulgent society.
However, people is divided to 2 part about this issue. One side believing the friendship is meaning always finding the same person as your character. If you be able to find someone like you, your friendship will be well-being and long-life. And also, you could to be enjoy with them due have the same pleasant. The similar individuals could be talkative with each other or they can find easily something to do in day. Like a going to same concert or same art gallery. It’s not gonna be hard deciding to choice what they have for fun.
On the other hand, second part of this issue people claims to have new friendship from other sides which we don’t have is more healthy. They says, we should connection the person who opposite the us. The main point in this issue you can improving yourself unless having a friend not like you. Therefore maybe be you can chance to find something from your new and different friends. And also they be able to learned something from you. Due this communication our society could be more intelligent.
In this circumstance, my opinion is always keeping have a friends from other the community. Due this behavior, we will have an increasing life standard such as technology, society, art, education. We must encourage the people having friend who have different ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rybody. Therefore the individuals always keeping touch witch each other. The reas...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Message: The verb mean is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'means'
Suggestion: means
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
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Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a opposite'.
Suggestion: who is a opposite
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lf unless having a friend not like you. Therefore maybe be you can chance to find somethi...
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Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91007194245 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60764573171 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5864928633 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.0 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276829534255 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890203852217 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795831930532 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181654660535 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05108692735 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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