Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is always a heated debate as what should be included in student’s curriculum at school level. One group of people is of the view that students should learn good parenting techniques at school level. I completely agree to this phenomenon, I shall explain my stance with valid arguments and examples.
To begin with, by learning the parenthood skills, a sense of responsibility will urge in students. Students will realize the role and responsibilities parents undertake. Moreover, students will get to realize the process of bringing up a child and how to make them a good gentlemen. In many countries, particularly in USA; children do not listen to their parents and show careless attitude towards their families and life.
Furthermore, by teaching good parenting methodologies at early school level, children will become good parent in the future. They will treat their kids with great responsibility and good manners. They will not become good citizen themselves but will do good upbringing of their child as well. It is of utmost importance to go through a process yourself to understand the requirement. For instance, in China, kids cleanup their school themselves to learn how to do cleaning themselves and also respect the cleaning staff.
There are certain elements to be a good parents. First and foremost, listen to your kid attentively and do not overlook the message your kid is trying to convey. Secondly, don’t be judgmental all the time and let go of mistakes as much as you can.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I clearly see a positive development of kids learning parenting techniques at school level. This concept will bring positive change not only at individual level but for a society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'gentleman'?
Suggestion: gentleman
... up a child and how to make them a good gentlemen. In many countries, particularly in USA...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to parent'.
Suggestion: to parent
...a positive development of kids learning parenting techniques at school level. This concep...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ual level but for a society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03132308862 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8769915744 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1764705882 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277540314499 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904175501897 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609299697034 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147031774201 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519578807731 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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