Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being a good and caring parent is a biggest challenge in our urban lifestyle. A group of member believes positively a good idea that the educational institutions should educate every youngsters about good parenting. I disagree with this idea because it will not only become an overloading education but also may become a distraction on their future career. Instead of that, they can learn it naturally, from parents.
Every parent has their own style of being a good parent. Therefore, young people who are always with them after school will learn the best from their parent practically. In other words, there could be a serious situation, be it health situation or financial situation, teenager would naturally learn seeing it how his/her parent handled that situation. Therefore, they may implicate the same when they come across such situation in their future. Perhaps, these cannot be scholared by having it in as one of a subject at school. Despite, to be a good parent, it is important to be very kind and lovable at any family situation.
Indeed, there are many psychological theories giving a comprehensive information for us to understand why would a person behave weird and when? For example, a popular singer Adele attracts many fans by her bold voice and performing many concerts at different part of the world. On the other hand, she goes crazy when paparazzi approach her when she is with her kid. Thus, it leads to dislike amongst die hard fans. While in actual, the great singer, intent to protect her young kid from crowd and camera flash. This shows how importance she gives from her motherhood stand point. Of course, theory could give a better explanation of this behavior
In summary, school is also one of a place to get wide education. However, educating youngsters to be in school outweighs adapting naturally from home through their own parents. Ultimately, kind heart and good personalities plays a vital role to be a good parent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to see'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in summary, of course, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97568389058 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69683152743 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.563442811 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1578947368 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361259085917 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107966210645 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101288311961 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209602674736 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750224110903 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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