You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
-advising them of your situation.
-explain how this is affecting you.
-request a new card.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Yuka studying Second Year Bachelors of Arts in Zoology in your University. I am writing to you now to require for a new student identification card.
I have missed my student identification cards during y recent visit to a symposium held at London University. Of course, I have reported it to the symposium organizer but until he comes back with my ID card, I will not be able to borrow any books from our university library. Please consider my situation to issue a new student identification cards. Also, I am aware of a small amount to receive a new id card.
Yours sincerely,
Yuka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a new student identification card. I have missed my student identification c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 516.0 937.175257732 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 108.0 206.0 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.22370979547 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03414213881 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 127.690721649 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1849982595 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7142857143 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254645634568 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121540439064 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771155874809 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197175311009 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517925483242 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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