Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good person.Do you agree or disagree with opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good person.

Do you agree or disagree with opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Some people think that it would be good idea for schools to teach every young person for being a good parent. I disagree with this opinion as one can learn how to be a good parent through the live experiences, one is taking while raising their children.

For children, parents are their role models. Parents give their best to raise their children. They give their best to raise children and give them best education.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the best'.
Suggestion: them the best
...e their best to raise children and give them best education.
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 347.0 1615.20841683 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 74.0 315.596192385 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68918918919 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.93297208767 4.20363070211 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18455465388 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 53.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716216216216 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 100.8 506.74238477 20% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0662580247 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372550470015 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209116807305 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.275964645534 0.0667982634062 413% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325278165108 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295282955987 0.056905535591 519% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 78.4519038076 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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