Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education plays a major role in the development of an individual. A group of people believe that higher education is necessary to prosper in life, whilst others argue that, these days, a university degree doesn’t have any significance in life. This essay agrees with the statement that edification is important to succeed in life. This essay will discuss both these views and will provide reasons to support my viewpoint.
According to some people success in life is determined to a great extent by the knowledge that one gains through education. This is because a person with a higher degree or knowledge have the ability to grasp things better and use it efficiently to succeed in life when compared to those who are less educated. For example, a software engineer knows how to make money through online platform which a common man may not know.
However, many people feels that, nowadays, university education is no longer a crucial factor in determining ones success. As people have access to everything through the internet, it is believed that anyone can gain knowledge through such online platform to accomplish their goal. Despite this fact, I believe that a graduate or post-graduate degree is essential to succeed in life because such people have a thorough knowledge regarding the subject compared to others. Also one cannot completely rely on the information provided on the internet as there are greater chances for it to be fake. To exemplify, , a civil engineer knows how to use technology in construction to reduce cost and make profit and thereby prosper in their career compared to those who are less educated but working in the same field.
In conclusion, though many think that the technological innovations are pushing university degree to a second place in acquiring their life goal, I strongly believe that higher education as strong foundation in any field has a great impact on one’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...garding the subject compared to others. Also one cannot completely rely on the infor...
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Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...chances for it to be fake. To exemplify, , a civil engineer knows how to use techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, for example, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10410094637 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7855103796 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2130358349 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247188198567 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829101140048 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669697456135 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147024260827 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369445604216 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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