Men and women equality is a controversial topic nowadays. Although there are people who believe that women and men are not equal particularly in a few jobs, I stick to the opinion that males and females are equal and they can be able to do whatever they want to do.
Women are used to be at home and always bound to a kitchen until the late 20th century because some people think that they are not able to do a job like men, others think it is not safe for them to go out and work, few people think it damages their family reputation. Since the 21st-century, everything is changed people evolved and they started treating men and women equally by giving freedom to women and allowing them to study and do a job.
Women are in every field of work and they are equally competing with men and proving themselves the best. Even in military women are equally competing with men and proving they are physically strong. if we consider any field of work like a doctor, engineer, police, scientist, sports, teacher, astronaut, women are doing the best, for example, Kalpana Chawla a woman astronaut, Mary Kom a woman boxer and she won 2 Olympic gold medals.
Though women are in all fields of work still some people are not allowing women to study and do what they want. government should implement awareness programs for women empowerment and provide scholarships and reservations for women.
To conclude, In society, people are treating men and women unequally and it should change. women are competing equally in all fields of work and the government should encourage women to do a job and study.
- Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved.What are your opinions on this? 73
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages. 73
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think that this can not be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69039145907 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5027536411 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498220640569 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3302430066 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.626787737195 0.244688304435 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288674435967 0.084324248473 342% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732642668709 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394243936141 0.151304729494 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681477906782 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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