In this present scenario, humans are progressing with betterment in technology. While, some people believe this advancement have negative impact on social life. Whereas others oppose this thought. Here, I shall scrutinise both sides of this assertion with my proper verdict at last.
Admittedly, technology has made people confined to four walls. First of all, now everyone is busy in their own, they use to play games on mobile rather than doing physical activities which eventually makes them anti -social . Individuals are becoming lazy and selfish, they thing every task can be done by modern gizmos. Moreover, modern entertainment which includes voilent and selfcentered people is turning masses into less- social, slaves of technology . Thus, this development in technology seems to be bane for mankind.
Neverthless, if used in a proper way it can be advantageous . As, present communication allows us to connect to different parts of world. Even, people can chart on internet and be updated about their loved ones. For instance, now students studying in different parts of world can be in touch with their parents. Besides, it has turned the world into small village, now it is possible to travel to different nations.People get more chance to socialise and promote their views. Hence, it has made the world more friendly place to live
In my opinion, every invention have negative side, but if it is used for positive development and in a limit then it can be boon for human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15573770492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75798554913 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1733930118 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150703446396 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489354003083 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447686435668 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791770142626 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049303240712 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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