It is argued that technology enables people more interactive others the view that it made antisocial. In my opinion, it made people less sociable
On one side of the argument, people intensely companionable and friendly with the employ of technology. The main reason is that communication technologies abolish distances and enable everyone to connect around the globe. for instance, through social media, anyone can build up a network of like-minded people. meanwhile, people have been able to reconnect with long lost friends through a social networking site. However, anonymity among people unveils with the utilization of technology.
Despite the above arguments, I am the view that individuals eventually be less affable by the means of technology.one main cause of that us, sociable is in the means of face to face interaction makes emotionally healthy. For instance, people now feel loneliness as they send more time with computers rather than human beings. Therefore, lack communication gradually losing interpersonal relationships. the consequences of all this is that people don't know how to behave and talk with others which may lead to rude behavior among individuals
In conclusion, because of technology, people have more relationships, less direct contact with others. The development is negative, as it is easier for people to feel lonely and less adept in social sessions. on behalf of, people should less the usage of electronic communications and seek time to spend with others to improve relationships.
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money making machines aimed at tourists other people believe that it is the only way to save such conditions in the world today Discuss both views and give your own opini 89
- Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online Others believe learning in schools is essential Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The office where you work does not have a proper car park Write a letter to your manager and say Explain the problem of no parking space available Suggest a solution for the car park problem Explain how this will help your company 73
- You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival Write a letter to the manager of shipping company about it and say What furniture did you order What was the damage Suggest what needs to be done about it 89
- There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays Why is this a problem What can be done to reduce it 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45991561181 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12557139286 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7469134882 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253399261511 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912562050408 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678866711111 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181838391331 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922136519672 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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