There is no denying fact that the phenomenon of reducing the number of wild animals such as dinosaurs are ubiquitous across the world because of its paramount important. One school of thought opines it is worthless while others consider couple of problems will occur because of the same. Although, there are plethora of reasons which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.
Without any doubt, we can say that because of human actions, temperature has drastically increase in atmosphere so that it is hard to survive this type of animals in this earth, besides that, cutting down the trees in forest has impacted greatly the habitat of endangered species. For example, amazon forest is the large forest in the world and it is many types of wild animals and we have the responsibility to protect it. In addition to this, humans haunt and tame them for entertainment and their satisfaction such as lock them in zoo and using them in circuses.
On the paradoxical side, there is natural process which is not under control of humans like bio-diversity and cycle is controlled by nature so that extinction and birth of any species is totally depend on the genes and climate situation although we have a limitation to protect and save them. To exemplify, there were many other big animals before ages not only dinosaurs and all had died in their process. Moreover, the same process id happening in the case of human being like ancient people had long life of more than 100 years and it has reduced now. And, it is hard to believe but there could have the possibility of the extinction of human life in this earth.
To conclude, this is a mixed bag, and awareness and campaign and will help people to protect as long possible but we cannot underestimate the process controlled by the nature.
- There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays Why is this a problem What can be done to reduce it 84
- In schools and university girls tend to choose art subjects while boys choose science subject What is the reason Should the trend be changed 78
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct e g Dinosaur dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 67
- Learning in one s nature tongue yields better school scores that learning in a medium language Do you agree or not 78
- Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roblems will occur because of the same. Although, there are plethora of reasons which wi...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...an actions, temperature has drastically increase in atmosphere so that it is hard to sur...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ion and birth of any species is totally depend on the genes and climate situation alth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79611650485 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64121688698 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7524914438 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179921117515 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625296337794 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268500872515 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978299158712 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361030646957 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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