Dear Farhan,
Congratulations dear, as you expected you have received a part time job in Mac Donald’s as a cook particularly it is very near to the college which you study but it is little far from your current accommodation and if you can change it definitely, it might have a wonderful opportunity to earn sufficient money for your tuition fees and daily expenses. While discussing with the restaurant manager, he told me that you have to assist the chef to make burgers for online orders only and they have offered meals while you are in duty so you can save one-time food expenses.
Besides that, I strongly recommend to accept this offer because they would like to pay 10 dollars per hour. In addition to this, you could have work for long hours when you get holidays and weekends and it will be an added advantage to your profession as well because the job which you get is perfectly match with your course. Apart from this, they expect an accept or rejection mail from you because they are very desperate in competitive workers.
I hope a positive reply from you
Thanks and regards,
Sunny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ar, as you expected you have received a part time job in Mac Donald’s as a cook particula...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend accepting'.
Suggestion: recommend accepting
...ood expenses. Besides that, I strongly recommend to accept this offer because they would like to p...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ur course. Apart from this, they expect an accept or rejection mail from you because they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, well, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67692307692 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56420512615 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.174766288 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.0 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190622062143 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871120752497 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715151919428 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114304266866 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604548672695 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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