Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education whereas others say this is no longer true, discuss these views and opinion?
Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of desperate people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether to be successful in life university education should achieve. Whereas others it is no need. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First of all, in the competitive world, more and more people choose to study in university due to get high standard job in order to meet the needs of life for that person should have a good qualification which have to attained from universities. The second point is, nowadays, some people do not have a job, wandering because of competitive in particular field. To exemplify, when the advancement of computers, more people to study in computer sectors. Consequently, there is a less chance in getting work in this sectors. As a consequence, people believe without any university studies it is to be difficult to be success.
Moving towards second argument of this debate, the first point is, success is not about to getting job that, as some individuals that considered. There are makes which is accomplished successful in life without any education not even know how to read and write. This is possible by patience and good characteristics mindset of people. Apart from this, those who have even good qualification and money, end the life in suicide. In that point of view, success is able to get the way people how they can handle the various problems and resolving matters in a better way. As a result, even though, people are educated there are different things need every person should achieve rather than education by good mindset.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, I concur that, although education is a main part to be succeed, whereas patience is also a factor that is imperative in life to be successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90746268657 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81597770805 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4979511487 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7058823529 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27504642741 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886327828767 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615662064863 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157087545607 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586155833057 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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