Children watch Tv more these days compared to the past.is it positive or negative development.
Nowadays, television plays an important role rather than in the past in the current World. I strongly agree that although there is a negative influence on television programs have on children, it's benefits cannot be ignored.
Certainly, watching television has a negative impact on children. The channels that are broadcasting for children, which they are displaying involves quarrels and crimes that which affects children to make violence and mimics. The actions of heroes and different behaviour they watch from television show further it create some adverse reaction in cognitive thinking. For example, an increased number of series of programmes that are broadcasting in a scheduled period of time provokes the children to sit more in front of the television. Although they try to copy the sounds and dialogue of characters from the programmes.
On the other hand, television has become a significant part of modern society because of the economics of it has cut down in the market. Television is many people's favourite way to relax and enjoy. most people get familiar with many stars, celebrates, politicians and renowned personalities through TV programmes. The voyage channels enable us to explore, about more Countries, moreover tv programs are often informative and educational, news coverages make the people aware of the World he or she lives in. For Example, most documentaries exhibited on Tv channel can make learning more interesting and they enriched the people's level of knowledge.
On conclusion, I agree that Tv is an effective learning tool and capability of promoting pupils study.However, it is advisable that parents should consider and select the programmes carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66914498141 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48325352203 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5505364789 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136184782988 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507517698475 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292518777359 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076373748618 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036958447284 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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