Learning in one’s nature tongue yields better school scores that learning in a medium language.
Do you agree or not?
Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of desperate people. Therefore, this has become a compelling issue whether the medium language of education is in their native language to achieve good scores. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in this favor. First of all, studying in a native language is convenient and students are proficient in their language. Hence, learning in it will enable get knowledge in every subject and also, can grasp everything in easy ways. The second point is equipping a maximum sure of the subject is not a difficult task for children in their language, however, when secondary language will become difficult when they need to go for university education. To exemplify in a cutthroat world, parents send their children to send in English medium. As a consequence, children will less stress in studies and can achieve more progress in education.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, the first point is, if the students are in their mother tongue at school, they will face difficulties when going for university courses. Since they are facing a new language, getting scores would be a matter and less knowledge. For instance, learning a language at an early age would be more useful than a teenager.
Apart from this, without knowing the medium language as English, students cannot communicate in professional areas.As a result, not possible to commend any topic updates and challenges to meet success in their life.
In conclusion, according to my perception, I concede that although learning a new language is risky, however, it is good at learning from primary school
- You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise which disturbs you Write a letter to the landlord In your letter explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a 78
- Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains Why do you think this happens What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains 73
- You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival Write a letter to the manager of shipping company about it and say What furniture did you order What was the damage Suggest what needs to be done about it 89
- Some people like to listen to music while working or studying Others find that they need silence to focus What is your preference Why do you find the other option unhelpful 82
- Nowadays many companies have manufacturing facilities in different countries 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'meeting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: meeting
...ommend any topic updates and challenges to meet success in their life. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69998148142 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3071715727 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155395862985 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535895737627 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561093312224 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998644334273 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591371552369 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.