It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of speaking in front of a group of people or to give a presentation before a team is a stage fear although a plethora of reasons are there, yet there are sensible solutions are also available to curb this grave concern
Commencing with the causes, first reason is that our educational system is not updated based on the current market situation especially the students those who study in government facilitated school. The second contributing factor is that lack of self-confidence and procrastination of people. In order to solve this issue, authorities should come forward and form a committee to check and update the syllabus of each classes of school and colleges thus we can generate more talented people.
In addition to this, need to introduce the activities and competition which improves the language and communications skills of students and promote the organizations which provides chance to improve the speaking skills internationally such as toast masters and Ted Talk. Not only the responsibilities of authorities the individuals itself need to come forward to develop communications skills because a proper communicator only can communicate to public either it is a presentation of speech.
To recapitulate, communication is a part of skill management and those who communicate well can handle any situations in life as well as carrier because transferring ideas and information would have created a wealthy and healthy person off course it will benefitted to nation as well.
- Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits.To what extent do you agree? 61
- Nowadays many people prefer to seek medical advice on internet instead of seeing a qualified doctor what are the reason for it 78
- Planting trees is important is very important for the environment Some people says trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns while others says housing facilities should be build instead Do you agree or disagree 84
- In schools and university girls tend to choose art subjects while boys choose science subject What is the reason Should the trend be changed 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...y and healthy person off course it will benefitted to nation as well.
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it will benefitted to nation as well.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33469387755 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29801474999 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.681321738 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.833333333 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.8333333333 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136591516343 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527760612419 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532508897192 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784291710334 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694024768613 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.0946893788 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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