Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers, others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Presenting gifts in various forms has been a long time tradition embedded in human history, which we are also following in the present era. It is often argued that money is the finest form of a gift for youngsters, whilst others disagree and think that other forms of tangible gifts signify more value than money. This essay agrees with the latter viewpoint and will discuss both points of view to support the arguments with examples.
To begin with the latter opinion, the goodies in various forms such as greeting cards, souvenirs and books express affection, love and compassion. Gifts are considered as the token of love and leave a remarkable and unforgettable impression on one's mind. A picture collage is the prime example of this and when looked at after years, it revives the nostalgic moments attached with the presenter. It is therefore agreed that such types of gifts are more valuable than money.
However, there are certain demographics of society who disagree and feel that gifts, when presented in the form of money, can financially support the teenagers. This way they can spend this money to carry out their expenses. Despite this belief, happiness attained from money is short-lived and once spent is forgotten. Also, when offered frequently, it curbs the youngsters to become self-reliant. Instead of money, some useful gifts can be presented in need as indirect financial help, which they will cherish a lifetime. For example, parents can present a laptop to their young child to help in studies. This way one's need is also fulfilled and most importantly, one will feel special and loved.
To recapitulate, This essay agrees that small tangible gifts than money represent true care and hold a special place in one's heart. Therefore, It would be right to say that money cannot buy true happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0396039604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57555607423 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8042846858 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188521082224 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557224938956 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536231484639 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110465512915 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598986037519 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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