some people think that old people should live in nursing home while others think that they should live with their family members, give your views and opinion
In the era of globalisation where everyone in the quest of fulfilinng their dreams, In terms of having luxurious life they run around the clock and don't find time to spend behind their loved ones, therefore some opine that it's good for elderly people to live in nursing home while opponent think otherwise, In this essay we shall discuss both groups perspectives and will give my opinion on basis of it.
To begin with, since we are living in 24/7 working society, children aren't able to spare time for their parents and becasue of that, they feel isolated and alone at house. that's whyyoung generation thinks that if their parents live in old age they will feel lively.
On the other hand, if eldrely live with their grand child then couple who works full time they don't have go through the process of finding pre-kindergarten care for their kid and at the same time their child can get love and learn about our culture and history of our nation from their family members. For instance, study says child who grew up in nuclear family is less sensitive and emotional then the one who comes from joint and big family.
In conclusion, I would agree with the latter group of people since, it's more benefical for both generation, since one can learn only learn importance of family if they come from that background and they lived that life.
Elderly would feel more lively and active if they get chance to spent time with their sudden family rather than outsiders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70542635659 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21744724657 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.216457 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.428571429 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303704525099 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1432041434 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660681652141 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166307036704 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411015316943 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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