In fast-paced world, people have different views about how to have relaxation, one's advice is to have ample rest such as sleeping is the best solution, others says doing some exercise such as sporting is much better. Personally, I think that the ideas are debatable, and will, therefore, examine the both sides in this essay and give my opinion.
Generally, to have rest in between or after work or take a short afternoon nap duing schooltime is well-know methods that feels relaxing. High-presure environment in everywhere, especially in modern society, forced people to meet their goals in career or gain better examine results in school. For example, majority of high school in China have a rule to ask student take 15 - 30 minutes sleep after lunch, people who work in school all believed the best solution to have exceptional relaxation in order to reduce stress is efficient rest. I remembered when I was in high school, after a nap, I used to gain knowledge suffieiently because my brian was sharpened.
Admittedly, for some people who have other thinking which is doing exercisie to improve body, thus calming no matter physical or mental attitude. However, it not only depends personality but also rely on their capability. After some activities, for example playing some sports, they would probably gain more presure from sports itself, it is helpless for themselves to relief, in the meantime, tiredness caused either sleepy or distressed.
In conclusion, simply go to sleep is functional for public and that is the best way to relax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ent views about how to have relaxation, ones advice is to have ample rest such as sl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0703125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72971550302 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6640625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0302743723 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256951930689 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854395026267 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608683268304 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152781674879 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648128029923 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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