some people think that parents should read stories to their children while others argue that this is no longer necessary as we have modern technology such as television and films. discuss boh both views and give your opinion.
It has been a matter of debate that some individuals believe that parents should read stories for their children whereas others argue that with the advancement of media technology like movies and TV, it is no longer required. In my opinion, it will be more accurate if parents help their children up to some particular age after that they are allowed to make choices according to their interests. This will make a child independent and wiser. This essay will consider both views in further discussion.
To embark on, the reading experience could be enhanced if parents are involved in it. It is not merely going through the written text, It is more than this. While reading, parents would be able to create an appropriate atmosphere which in turn generates interest in reading. Moreover, the explanation of written text with deep meanings in between lines and the moral of the story will give an important lesson for life. During our childhood, our parents and grandparents told us stories base on social ethics like honesty and loyalty. Furthermore, for parents, it can become a chance to spend quality time with family and hence develop strong bonds of relationships.
on the other hand, the advancement of technology has also become a good source of reading. various modes of learning such as films, plays, television all these not only give an audiovisual approach to the reader but also generate better understanding. secondly, a child can easily find their area of interest and by exploring more in the specific field one would able to consume more knowledge. For instance, animation has brought huge interest in children due to which schools use this model to learn rhymes and poems.
In conclusion, parent's involvement will give a human touch and a deeper sense of understanding while technology made it easy to grasp more knowledge while sitting in comfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10064935065 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74983516579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626623376623 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7917312739 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260311077197 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772299699214 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649704478844 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147121357835 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083519007577 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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