Some people think that paying tax is their only duty while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards society. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
People have different approach towards contribution to the society, some may assume paying levy is sufficient whereas others contradict. Those who believe that paying taxes are enough held responsible for each service, however, others think to lend hand-in-hand support by contributing ethically and morally for the sake of people living around. This essay will discuss both sides to form an opinion.
On one side, sharing financial burden by paying taxes creates the liability of the authorities to provide the facilities to the local people. The population pays a handsome amount towards the development of the nation in the form of levy except that nothing should be done as citizens, the sole responsibility is of the Government only. For example: in Canada the authorities take care of people healthcare out of the funds collected in the form of tax. People are of the view that by paying levy their liability is over.
On the other side, apart from financial contribution, there is moral and ethical responsibility of every person of the society. By lending support in the form of time can be a major reform towards creating new era. To exemplify: by planting even one tree become a root for saving thousands of lives. Individual can transform the society by taking stepping-stones which prove to be beneficial for the present society and posterity.
To conclude, one part of population think that only by sharing their part of income is enough while other part believe in addition to the financial share the people may participate morally and ethically for the development and welfare of the society. In my opinion, people should undertake more responsibility than paying taxes only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... responsibility than paying taxes only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19202898551 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86045619086 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.176707675 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334440504892 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110531454588 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781756535338 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198552078653 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957274806541 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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