Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
There are enormous of people believe that a person can never understand the culture of a country, if he/she don't speak the language. Therefore, I agree with this statement, I will argue in details about it as following;
First of all, language can be counted as a method to people for transferring mutual discussion and ideas between each other, however we can not live naturally in a country if we don't know its language, in addition, that we might have passive consequences while dealing with other individuals as well as we will not be able to adapt in a country in different situations, hence we believe in recent days that a large number of people prefer to travel to another countries either for studying of working due to the unemployment which it exists in their country, in this case, one's has to learn the language before leaving his original country, so that they can have the ability to adapt in as per the culture requirements, furthermore, knowledge of country's language is an essential for individuals to learn it.
Notably, there are a lot of matures faild to reach their destination goal, because they don't know the mother language of a country that they need to move into it. For example, there are people tend to shift to Germany for settling over there, unfortunately, they don't know the language, as a consequence, they found a numeric of difficulties, such as not finding job, even in simple jobs' tasks like stewart in a restaurant, I believe that they can not work in an organisation without knowing the language, because how they can work in a place that they don't know the language of it. However, language is basic aspect to have known it, so that they continued their work naturally, in addition we believe that there are a lot of persons left their country to work western countries, but they lost many chances, as a result, they have come back to original country, we believe that they spent a huge amount of money to cross miles seeking for job, but they lost a lot of chances due to their disabilities of talking the language of concerned countries. In the modern age, there are a number of countries request Ielts or Toefl for traveling procedures for example USA, and UK, as individuals can't travel or apply in the embassy without completing the test's requirements successfully, this one is approved by the embassy for English proficieny, and after they have done, they can continue to next steps to file up an application for the concernd embassy. In addition, this procedure is applied on education, if someone wants to continue master, BA degrees, and Phd.
In brief, language plays an integrate part in a country, if you don't speak it, you will encounter some difficulties, as it will lead to failure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in brief, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7731092437 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75305327031 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489495798319 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 250.831087338 49.4020404114 508% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.0 106.682146367 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.5 20.7667163134 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.25 7.06120827912 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268006474117 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130617954666 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854228571657 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192536335941 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935253378312 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 13.0946893788 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.