Some people think that robots are very important for humans’ future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
All over the ages, it is generally acknowledge that, mankind is responsible to take care of his own duties and chores. And within the last few decades robots has become a life necessity for people from all ages. For Instance, Auto-Washing Machines for house wives, Smart Phones for almost of us, Auto-Pilot in plans and so on. Consequently many discussion have been arisen around the affects of this spreading of robots. Accordingly this topic has emerged as one of the contentious topics in the last ten years. Many people see that robots became a vital element in the modern societies life, while others have a fully opposite methodology as they convinced its long term affects will be detrimental. In this essay i will explore both point of views, before illustrate my own perspective.
Those who believe that, robots machines have to take much more place to assist human to enhance their life and achieve the luxury and prosperity. It can be argued that, Some jobs have a massive risks on people's life. For instance mining works , the mining workers have to work in a very tough environment facing: heat, explosions and so on. Thus, intervene robots in such these places will reduce the risks possibility . It is apparent why many people gravitate to this point of view.
On the other hand, it is supported by others that, Full reliance on robots may cause long term consequences too grave to ignore. For example, nowadays in our contemporary era, house wives has became a slave of modern technologies such as Auto-washing machines, Accordingly they become more lazier that before, consequently many health issues begin to appear like obesity .
In conclusion, The problem of effects of robots not only on our daily life but also on the surrounding world is not straight forward as it first appears. I believe that robots have helped human to improve their limited abilities and act as an extend eyes to enable them to look beyond their visual boundaries, So I can point out that in the near future, robots will contribute in a many vital discoveries. Finally, we as a mankind has the fully choose to get best of using the modern technology as i consider it a divine gift.
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... best of using the modern technology as i consider it a divine gift.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247002398082 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.136690647482 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107913669065 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0551558752998 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0503597122302 0.0437548338989 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141486810552 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0191846522782 0.0403226058552 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.6770489756 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287769784173 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00239808153477 0.00163938923432 146% => OK
Determiners: 0.083932853717 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167865707434 0.021408717616 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00479616306954 0.011925033212 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2192.0 1933.35771543 113% => OK
No of words: 376.0 316.048096192 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82978723404 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337765957447 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207446808511 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13829787234 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106382978723 0.137316102897 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6770489756 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.037074148 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577127659574 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 66.8841595664 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1176470588 20.7743622355 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2343516329 49.517814964 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.941176471 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7743622355 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.99599198397 375% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.8623279099 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.68316831683 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194395197931 0.332605444948 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0689282133681 0.102741220458 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0442376544525 0.0668466124924 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468277153402 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107695441867 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781411211365 0.134430193775 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488683669121 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284791086536 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0576146376936 0.0638462369009 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143308317514 0.228012699653 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215522982825 0.058150111329 37% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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