It is a popular belief that in the future , robots would be viable to
participate in the myriad of vocations currently conducted by mankind .
While this issue is adverse to some extent, it would do more good than
harm
There are undeniable detriments on that problem. Firstly, in the short
term, it is likely that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in
various industries are replaced by machines. For example, self-driving
vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving jobs, such as
lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. A longer term fear is that
robots become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without
human oversight and without regard for our well-being.
Secondly , we have hazardous robot sex which is the trend that single
people tend to purchase it . "There is a danger that people might be
inclined to seek more than just sex from the robot intimacy and
companionship," Scheutz said. "And that could lead to unidirectional
emotional bonds with machines that the machines cannot reciprocate
and could affect the ways people interact with other people."
There are also some benefits of this belief. Thirdly, residents allow
automations to rectify such certain household chores as cooking ,
dishwashing , cleaning which is time-consuming . Therefore; some
domestic tasks, specifically those demanding for the meticulousness
and diligence are feasible to substituted by sophisticated cyborgs . By
means of illustration , high-tech robotic vacuum cleaners of Xiaomi
have long been impossible to clean 99,9999% dust and bacteria within
nooks and crannies regarding the apartment .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64822134387 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13658484592 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679841897233 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9438307447 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116581348907 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367939737674 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286221128058 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258880327087 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368998886453 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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