Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
In today’s competitive world there’s always an urge to compete and defeat. There’s a section of society that believes that competitive nature should be encouraged from a very young age while another argues that cooperation is a way to a successful life. I believe in the later and this essay will discuss both the views followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, children today are under extreme social pressure than ever before as mediocrity is no more acceptable. This cut-throat competition has resulted in new-age diseases like depression, diabetes which has affected the young generation. For instance, the presence of kids as small as 3 years old in reality shows has left kids more vulnerable to public glare and judgment.
Moreover, competition takes away the spirit of cooperation. Parents should encourage teamwork in kids, which would, in turn, help them to be social. While complacency should be abhorred but to find competition in every action is not recommended too. It has also been observed that children who are taught teamwork are more satisfied and in a healthy state of mind than others. In addition to this, working in groups helps an individual to learn from others and be more well-mannered.
To conclude, I would suggest that though parents should groom their kids to survive in this competitive world, they should also teach them the importance of teamwork.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18859649123 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89557071987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2176116273 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233295568852 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768975977461 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046293116801 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125201320393 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589413106063 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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