Some people think that spending a lot on birthday celebrations and wedding is a waste of money But others think that it is important to young people and the society Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a vexed question whether spending colossal amount of fiscal resources on celebrating special occasions is waste of precious resource or this celebration is vital for young generation and society. This essay will elaborate the both point of views following with my perspective on this facet.
Initializing with the prime notion, the segment of the society oppose wasting monetary resources for the sake of entertainment on special functions is a destructive approach because is the world of inflation managing future funds are highly required. To make the single day special with huge expenses is not feasible at all because it utilises the savings of hard work. People who support this point of view reckon that whole world is rushing in the direction of earning and due to those masses are working around the clock, so, this hard work means a lot. Everyone deserves better future; therefore, the utilisation of money should be in such area where individual can get benefit out of it.
Paradoxically, another group of individuals stimulate celebrations to make the occasion special because they have strong opinion that it is a constructive phenomenon not merely for adolescents but also for social purpose. Everybody have authority to lead their life with their own way and to make the life entertaining, it is required to have fun on their special dates for which they wait at least for a year. By this manner they get connected with their near and dear ones, which are already absent due to busy schedule. Moreover, get together builds strong bond with known, also provides golden opportunity to refresh the mind. To site a paradigm, working for longer hours is depressing tendency, so to have mental peace changes are required which leads towards exorbitant in productivity of human behaviour.
According to my prospective later facet weighing more than the former one because money is a source which can be earn by putting efforts, however, emotions and relaxation are the face which cannot buy with the support of money. So, celebrations are the part of life which should be happen with the time. Besides, in this running world everyone just prerequisite materialistic world and neglecting relationships, so, celebrations provide chance to have quality hours with family and friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happened'?
Suggestion: happened
...ns are the part of life which should be happen with the time. Besides, in this running...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16844919786 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78584092562 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1832124042 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.071428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912644781109 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316775824918 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324626224319 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637726382635 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378341421266 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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