Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is important to consider that which phase of life is the most enjoyable. While many people believe that teenagehood is the happiest part of life, others argue that despite of responsibilities, adulthood brings more enjoyment. In this essay, I will elaborate both sides of the statement and explain my support to the latter view.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that freedom is the prime factor of children's happiness. The reason for this is that, many time they depends on their parents for finance rather than being responsible for own expenses. To clarify, parents give pocket-money to adolescents for shopping, movies and other things whereby they can get more leisure time for themselves instead of working under pressure. Additionally, they can choose their time for classes and tuitions so that in the morning they can sleep in. However, elderly people feel trapped and almost imprisoned in terms of freedom.
On the other hand, my view is that aged people can differentiate between right and wrong things thereby they can cherish their life in real way inspite of greater responsibilities. In contrast, sometimes younger people can put them in trouble without knowing difference which becomes the cause of serious problems in many cases. To illustrate, sometime to follow footsteps of their role model, they mimic their habits as well. As a consequence, they starts smoking and drinking which affects their health. Moreover, as a responsible person, adults are independent. So that, they can spend money according to requirement to fulfill their desires and needs without asking anyone which makes their life the most enjoyable.
In conclusion, it is widely accepted that teenage time is the joyous time of many people's lives, in my notion adulthood brings more enjoyment even if they have more responsibilities as they can understand real meaning of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...happiness. The reason for this is that, many time they depends on their parents for finan...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...reason for this is that, many time they depends on their parents for finance rather tha...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
... habits as well. As a consequence, they starts smoking and drinking which affects thei...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...person, adults are independent. So that, they can spend money according to requir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20394736842 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81079703752 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.176473086 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20254763288 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684491144703 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688689570998 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147532807519 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619023304623 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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