Some people think teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss posters views and give your own opinion.
It is thought that childhood is the happiest age of a human. However, some hold the other side and insist on adulthood to be the happiest one. This essay will shed light on this debate, while putting forth my supportive idea on the latter view.
To begin with, more freedom human beings have, absolutely happier they are. To explain more, although children are free to enjoy their life playing games, learning rules and watching cartoons, they are not free enough to decide about their own life. On the other hand, as middle age members of public have found out what they hold interest on, they can live a by far satisfying life. Mature people not only have experienced many enjoyable activities, but also have heard or even planned to do more jobs. Had teenagers experienced more, they could be more aware of both their interests and the most enjoyable ones. In conclusion, since children are not as free as adults, they lack enjoyable opportunities in compare with them.
Furthermore, many desires of mature members of public can be put into action, because of which such persons are full of good sense, even though they are captured by lots of responsibilities that make them postpone some enjoyable activities. It is true that immature individuals have less and smaller wishes that help them be happy most of the times, nevertheless, majority of desires of a mature human being are applicable, in regarding to their power and money. So that, being strong and wealthy, adult persons who can fulfil their big desires, are the happiest people in the world.
To sum up, in spite of having many responsibilities, adulthood brings individuals more satisfaction, and it is the happiest period of life for most public members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96232876712 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64477589923 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2264074309 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162356069785 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608244999689 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451708566425 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107541644081 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398939713432 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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