Some people think that the use of mobile phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries, shops and on public transport. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is believed by many that the cellular phones should be barred from use in many places like libraries, shopping centres and while using public transport. Although the increasing use of cellular is a noteworthy issue, I firmly disagree with the view of banning these in any of these places as the over-usage of cells is more of a behavioural problem rather than a global one, and this can be controlled at personal levels.
Banning mobiles at some social places is not an appropriate act as nowadays, these are not considered as luxuries, but necessities. Not every person is using mobiles for leisure activities, there are many who actually utilize it for some creative purposes. Cell phones now have latest technology and interesting applications which are used by many people globally for variety of reasons such as business, education, hobbies and many more. An individual in library for instance, might require to refer to sites such as Google, for any query related to the books he is referring to. While using public transport as well, mobiles can play a significant role of entertainment or the camera can be used for capturing memories too. Moreover, shops can be another place where a person might have to use his cellular for inquiring anything from his family. Hence, banning mobiles specifically for any place such as libraries, shops or public transportation is irrelevant as it all depend on an individual's needs.
Furthermore, mobiles play a key role for connecting everyone to their families and in case of any emergencies, these play a vital role to connect with close ones. However, there are other options like silent mode or vibration mode available on mobile phones which can actually notify the user without causing any sort of disturbance to others. these options can be effectively used in places like libraries, where it is strongly recommended to do so. Watching a mobile without any sound by using headphones is another way of entertaining oneself in public transport without deterring peace of others.
To conclude, banning the cellular is not a suitable solution as it is a basic requirement these days, nevertheless, there are many other options by which these can be used appropriately without the risk of disturbing fellow mates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
...some creative purposes. Cell phones now have latest technology and interesting applications...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'referring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: referring
... in library for instance, might require to refer to sites such as Google, for any query ...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...sing any sort of disturbance to others. these options can be effectively used in plac...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended doing'.
Suggestion: recommended doing
...es like libraries, where it is strongly recommended to do so. Watching a mobile without any sound...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07754010695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142856917 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516042780749 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8120795943 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.642857143 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31224292435 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12020477335 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791620445694 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186110448598 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833625432442 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.