Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is a fact that the sleeping patterns of people have changed over the years and they tend to sleep less than their ancestors. The reason for this is the increasing levels of stress among people and as a result of this, it has negative effects on individuals and pupils surrounded around them.
The main primary reason that people sleep less nowadays is massive competition in their workplace. people are so highly overloaded with the work which makes their mind exhausted and eventually increases the stress levels which reduces their sleep. Another reason is that the cost of living is so much which urge people to do some side business whereas in the previous time one income was enough to manage the family.
However, there are some negative effects both personally and socially. First of all, sleep deprivation causes tiredness, depression, lack of concentration as well as health problems including obesity, high blood pressure, and diabetes.
Moreover, insufficient sleep makes people lethargic and as a result of which they tend to be less productive in work and are not able to achieve desired results in their work.
In conclusion, healthy competition is this era has resulted in sleep deprivation among individuals, but the government should bring awareness by launching motivational seminars which will help the pupils to reduce their stress level and encourage them to remain tension free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is a fact that the sleeping patterns of...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...massive competition in their workplace. people are so highly overloaded with the work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20175438596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67666063549 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.238385569 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.777777778 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828980423508 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405313773947 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380343139287 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430848160289 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364526492668 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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