Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you agree or disagree.
It is argued by some individuals that watching athletes show during free period is a time wastage activity. I completely disagree with the notion and believe that watching games at free time aids in understanding the game new rules and regulations as well as inspires to take part in these games.
To begin with, watching sports at free time provides a vast variety of information about the current position of sports in nation. People can make themselves aware and increase their general knowledge about sports not only of their own nation but also of other nations as well. For instance, watching soccer world cup enables individual about the growth and development in the game like, introduction of new rules or changes in the current rules. Therefore, watching sports is not a time wastage during free time.
Secondly, it encourages people to take part in games. Viewing on regular basis during leisure time boost the momentum of people to appreciate the game and increase their willingness to play such games. For example, after watching football games between Argentina and Brazil, the audience of many nations want to participate in such games on international level and thus the popularity of game increases substantially. Therefore I completely believe that watching games during leisure time is productive for the people to bring their interest in games.
In conclusion, I disagree with the notion of believe that watching sports during leisure period is a wastage of time because of the aforementioned reasons and personally consider it is a prime way to introduce sports among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18461538462 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7759640364 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0976023178 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351459029386 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171216483004 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133028590298 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232497978832 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289168758275 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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