Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Other believe that there are good reason for having zoos.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A simple recognition to this fact that animals are free and should live in their fauna, some people subscribe to keep wild animals in zoos but others believe they should not been captivated.
Firstly, it’s quietly relevant that zoos have some benefits. For instance, there seems some countries aren’t able to own many kinds of species because of many factors which includes weather, preys, water and other things. So, one of the advantages of zoos is even an environment couldn’t prepare a surface to inhabit them, you can watch all kinds of savage animals behind a glass and be aware of their habits and behaviors.
Despite of these points, predatory creatures must live in their own habitat. The should predate, run, rest and do what their instinct require in a vast fauna. but zoos deprive them from this inalienable right. Of course it is undeniable that many hunters who business with those sinless animals are support this opinion to release them to environment.
To conclude, Due to the opinions base on keeping wild animals in zoo, My tendency is more to release them to where they belong. this is high time people whom are in charge free them to nature. Today with accessing to Internet and many social media it’s quiet more simple to watch them and realize them , I prefer to bring them their rights and freedoms. As all aware, animals rights is next to human rights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94537815126 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42945314995 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626050420168 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4645654429 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0833333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16417490956 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600389477547 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053302308144 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112891999096 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592345959374 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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