Most of the people in the world have the determination to attain the desires. So people work accordingly to achieve their goals. Definitely, duties are performed by an individual with maximum importance for their quality lifestyle not only to them but also for the subsequent generations. I strongly believe that life goes in vain without one's hard work.
Doing our duties on time leads us as a responsible person in the community. It improves concentration levels and promotes development in every aspect of life. A person can be a decision-maker out of the experience he has with the academic, professional or individual works. He will be able to earn his livelihood with satisfaction. He gets an opportunity to meet up with different people around and gain knowledge and respect. He can migrate to places to live wherever possible without difficulty. He need not worry about upcoming situations and be ready to fight in his whole life. Work responsibility inclines people to lead their lives with positive outcomes.
Looking at the drawbacks, a person who is not willing to perform his duties faces various difficulties in his life. He doe not have experience of expressing his views, cannot even earn his livelihood in the desired way.
Also, he cannot socialize himself in these modern days as everything has been a growing trend to show off in societies.
We have a common saying, "work is Worship". The meaning
lying behind is that a person must treat duties as a prayer for his self-reliance and definitely has a positive impact on one's own life. To conclude I completely agree that work plays a vital role in people's lives to gain success in every moment of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... around and gain knowledge and respect. He can migrate to places to live wherever ...
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Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e wherever possible without difficulty. He need not worry about upcoming situation...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96819787986 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98744391353 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5486860965 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157599850907 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544843568619 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549042071974 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746381883617 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643042469837 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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