People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think that ageing population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views and give your own option.
In the modernization of technology, new medical equipments lay a vital role in increasing the lifespan of older people. The old aged pupils' thoughts lead to national development as compared with huge problems associated with ageing like unemployment.In my opinion ageing is a professional experience sharing with the community which is a positive development. On the other side has negligible demerits if younger generations grab the opportunities.
Pupil over the age of 50, utilize the experiences they have in their lifetime. Their dedication towards the work has a positive impact in sectors like education, finance management, family problems. Old aged people working in government sectors help the nation economically as they have the awareness through newspapers, journals, magazines. They have the capability of analyzing, creating solutions and impart moral values to the later generations. For example, in olden days, even without technology, most of the pupils are into farming and earned basic healthy livelihood.
Of course,there are drawbacks as limited job vacancies to younger generations in the current competitive world. Old aged people are not accustomed to new advancements and lag behind professionally to some extent. Youngsters approach is dependent on the technology Population also increases and lessens the availability of natural resources like food, water.
To conclude, I believe that ageing benefits the society and provides multiple opportunities to the younger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75675675676 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24739786447 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5055375865 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111717940357 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363808198943 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366124210261 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063752298516 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184139001531 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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