Traveling has witnessed an upward trail in recent times. I can say that the tourism industry is attracting a lot more travelers every year. This essay delves into the reasons behind increasing travelers and outweighs the benefits of traveling.
Tourism is a popular leisure activity. Tourists can relax, have fun, recharge their batteries, experience different customs and cultures visiting historical monuments, tasting new cuisines. Travel broaden our horizon.
The tourism industry is vital for some countries. People rely on tourism for their income. Tourism attracts investments from governments and companies. It creates employment due to the demand for goods and services. It helps to improve the standard of living. Low-cost airlines, construction of airports even in small cities has led people to have access even from remote areas. More affordable hotels, advanced technology for online bookings, availability of internet has become far simpler. Better opportunity in other countries raised the migration of students.
Tourism can harm the environment. Excessive buildings destroys natural habitats and spoils the landscape. It puts pressure on local resources available such as food, water. Tourism may cause a rise in the cost of living. Local traditions and job skills may be lost.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62755102041 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79317514016 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719387755102 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0369419728 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0526315789 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.3157894737 20.7667163134 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.05263157895 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0864237297451 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227671880775 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339160476957 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516277993973 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507191447315 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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