Some people today feel that their country should refrain from accepting large numbers of immigrants. However, others believe that taking in individuals from other countries is the right thing to do. What is your opinion on this issue?
Increasing number of immigrants has been in the headline for decades. Some feel that individuals from other countries should not be allowed to into their country. However, I am with those who believe that individuals from other countries are a necessity to develop a country. In this essay, I will explain the reason for my opinion.
I believe that new immigrants from another country are quite productive for every country.The reason behind is that this will bring diversity among the citizens. Considering a report which was published by Stanford University which states that after having new immigrants from other countries the overall income of the business has climbed by 3 times and this help in economic development of the United States. In addition to this, the same report states that with entering of new people in the United States now they have more than 15 types of different cultures which are engaged in different types of activities, which they are handling in more efficient manner.
With new immigrants, now countries have a better relation in comparison to the past. Not only this, help in the better relation between two countries but this also helps them in engaging globalization. For instance, a study was published by University of Melbourne which states that with the increase in immigration from China, Australia now have better relations with China, and today Australia is one of the biggest exporters to China.
I hope that people who hold the notion that immigrations from other countries should refrain, they might understand that the world where they are leaving they have to consider every aspect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13857677903 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67507511605 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5652502685 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292209852988 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130139878242 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104326149478 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19560395877 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107008265367 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.