Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nations these days are collaborating with each other in several sectors such as trading, defense, and politics…etc. This relation doesn’t mean that we can interfere in others internal affairs; but some people believe that nations should involve in other countries matters, and other nations think that should not interfere at all.
On the one hand, every country should focus on their relationship with other nations. When a country is passing through economics crisis, natural disasters happen, they request the aid from superpower nations; for example, the Tsunamis that happen yearly in Philippine, most countries hurry up and provide humanitarian assistance for the country and people. However, terror attacks are common in many places, this demand defense support for civilians and common interests, between the two states. In my opinion, I believe that each country should build a good connection and relationship with all nations and be neutral.
On the other hand, there is several reasons that nations should not show their interest in others. First, some believe that other countries should not involve in politicians, religious concerns of the other nations. Second, big countries and independent state should look over its own crowd, problems, and economy rather than advising others and they do not take care of the needs of their people. For example, USA and China keep an eye on trade with other nations which drags them into conflicts. From my side nations should not interfere in other states or lust and greed in their resources.
As a conclusion, there is two types of nations, some prefer to interfere in the affairs of other countries, and some prefer to be neutral. I agree that each country must rule its people and demand their needs, and never interfere in other countries affairs, unless there is a concern related to human rights or natural disasters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are several reasons'?
Suggestion: there are several reasons
...s and be neutral. On the other hand, there is several reasons that nations should not show their inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23026315789 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56858821717 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2375495904 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323900084849 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127225780049 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746444240525 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21933898275 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618284275011 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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