In modern life, humans are more likely to satisfy their demands by a multitude of decisions, one of those ways is traveling. For this reason, people have differing views about whether people should visit their areas or take a journey to new places. From my perspective, I firmly believe that travel abroad is more beneficial.
My opinion will be supported by a whole host of the following factors. The majority reason is travel outside the country will improve the level of foreign languages. In the digital and information age, seemingly new knowledge needed to be explored by other languages, and traveling is considered as the best way to boost it. The fact that when people stay at strange places where the citizens communicate by their mother tongues which means it has difficulty understanding this means of communication, as the only way to survive, visitors force to learn and practice it day by day. As the result, they tend to achieve a huge success in a better level rapidly by indulging themselves in new language step by step, furthermore, individuals might be learned native speaker’s ton and rhythm naturally. The second reason is, traveling abroad is a chance for humans to challenge themselves. This might be explained by living in a strange area for a period of time. When they travel on their own, they are forced to ask local people where to stay, where to eat and how to survive, also, they are unwilling to finish all the tasks, consequently, it is beneficial for being an independent person. Finally, over-local-areas visiting will be a great value of broadening the horizon. When the rapid growth of technology has introduced a growing number of cutting-edge inventions, it is not unnecessary to gain knowledge of boosting the economy from wealthy nations. By traveling there, developed countries indirectly impart advanced-method to them so that they stand a good chance to enhance their productivity performance in a short space of time.
This view seems properly at first, however, look inside there will be a problem, if we do not know enough our areas how can we be confident about the knowledge of our country? I totally disagree with this opinion. It is indisputable that local people know so well about their living places. Because of its visually unattractive, in lieu of pouring time visiting around the city, taking an abroad journey will be more stimulate and enthusiastic. Additionally, as has been outlined above, over-local-areas traveling considers as a didactic and recreational trip which will exert a positive impact on individuals and their country, in particular.
Taking everything into consideration, it is more advisable to travel abroad due to a great variety of above-mentioned reasons. For my part, I still stand up for supporting abroad journey.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...the only way to survive, visitors force to learn and practice it day by day. As the resu...
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Line 3, column 943, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ained by living in a strange area for a period of time. When they travel on their own, they ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, still, thus, well, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10217391304 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0417471785 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9399540904 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.761904762 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218959253883 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063374230952 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482556436497 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133045144207 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243688722172 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...the only way to survive, visitors force to learn and practice it day by day. As the resu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 943, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ained by living in a strange area for a period of time. When they travel on their own, they ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, still, thus, well, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10217391304 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0417471785 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9399540904 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.761904762 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218959253883 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063374230952 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482556436497 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133045144207 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243688722172 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.