In the world individual works in various styles. Some may stay in same industry and other shift often.
Most of the people have job recognition,promotion and good payment is bed of rose for the employees to be stable in organization. Some individual for various reasons to stay chance of working in alternate platform and good team formation. Employees are optimistic and skilled workers wants to stick in the organization show there job professionals. Moreover sticking in the one industry lifelong is become boring and monotonous. Because of that employees are deteriorating in the carrier.
In otherhand some individual believe working in different organization that would gain knowledge.
Therfore they get different environment because of that update there salary and market values. Some other reason profile of an employee may fall down due to alter the organization within short period of time. The company understands profile is unprofessional.
After analysis two views staying in one company lifelong is only a professional growth but working in different working in different company benefits both personal and professional life.Thus it is recommend to the individual to alter there industry for the development of carrier and life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21265942103 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.1762727163 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298279295259 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911208875475 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838292448243 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169031151347 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646077707122 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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