Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
While some people keep working in a business until they retire, others thought that it is preferable to labour for various companies in one’s working life. In my opinion, I consider that people can enjoy the benefit of speedy promotion and job stability when working with a firm till until their retirement.
On the one hand, some critics argue that one can be promoted earlier than expected after working with a company for a long period of time. Supporters of this view claim that some companies have the policy of rewarding loyal employees with promotions after few years of their service. I agree that it is worthwhile to work with a single firm in one’s life time because one can attain the highest position for being loyal. To illustrate this, at the age of 40 years, May Charles was made the Group Managing Director of Grail, a multinational corporation because of her 21 years of active service. Furthermore, a proportion of the population also claimed that people who work in an organization in their entire working life enjoy job stability. In other words, they are not likely to be sacked or retrenched for any reason because they must have understood the structure and policy of the company as well as being in long service with the company.
On the other hand, other people believe that people ought to work at different firm to earn better wages. Advocates of this view argue that huge salary should be the motivation for employees in workforce. Thus, workers should work with range of companies that give the best incentives and remuneration. In addition, people change employers because they get bored with their jobs easily. That is, these set of people find their jobs extremely routine since they keep doing the same thing and see same faces every day. Consequently, they get tired and demotivated doing the jobs. For example, in 2012, The Time newspaper reported that 35 percent of secondary school teachers in the UK have worked in no more than four different schools because they are bored doing the same thing always.
In conclusion, while some argue that boredom and high paying salary are reasons to change jobs before retirement, in my opinion, I believe people should remain in one job to enjoy unmerited elevation and stability before they quit working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...after working with a company for a long period of time. Supporters of this view claim that som...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...o work with a single firm in one's life time because one can attain the highest posi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...olicy of the company as well as being in long service with the company. On the...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...use they are bored doing the same thing always. In conclusion, while some argue tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93556701031 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53179772776 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.409690529 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341223603307 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119802449388 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877019842931 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212728099831 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995648792581 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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