There is a hot discussion going on whether to encourage school going kiddos to participate in sports or cultural activities or the professionals to take part in it by the government. Last year survey perplexed everyone that success rate of children in outdoor and arts are more when compare it to the experienced. Some opine that the number high in scale for younger generation is only because of the dedication that they have when we match with the professionals. The other factor is children get immense dedication when we compete with the ongoing practitioners.
Some demographics believes that the government should release more funds for the knowledgeable sports or cultural performers because as they have control on that particular activity , so it would be easy for them to navigate to the next stages by keeping appropriate trainers. They even make country's pride very high grabbing all the awards and rewards if and only if giving all the necessary facilities and the support by the ruling body.
Keeping all the positives and negatives aside its indeed a individual interest and enthusiasm to promote to the next stage could be national or international champion,so its completely depends on personal interest to get succeeded comparing it with professionals or school going pupils.
- In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
- The college years are the best time in a person's life. 73
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 61
- Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 56
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s live. Others, think that adults life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'believe'.
Suggestion: believe
...ing practitioners. Some demographics believes that the government should release more...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...have control on that particular activity , so it would be easy for them to navigat...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll the awards and rewards if and only if giving all the necessary facilities and ...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...g all the positives and negatives aside its indeed a individual interest and enthus...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ositives and negatives aside its indeed a individual interest and enthusiasm to p...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...ld be national or international champion,so its completely depends on personal inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22488038278 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00247819034 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607655502392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1269650763 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176766699752 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726999103245 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703956038954 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103270416655 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498094303085 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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