These days, children were given loots of pressure by the parents to become a better person in their life.
Some guardians choose best schools in their town giving least priority to the money to taste the fruit of success, taking this advantage many of the educational institutions hiked their fees just by uttering best and quality education to the pupils, but parents perspective could be the best education to get into higher studies. Certain demographics feel the education is just a persona that they would like to project to the society, and others to attain a respect from their well beings. Some of the children was focuses by their immediate family members to get succeeded in their studies in order to get good score, as it could be they failed at certain point of time whilst achieving the right path. Looking at the other competitor at their child's age , they even dream their kid to be the same. More noticeable thing we hear from most of their parents is imbibing all their dreams which they did not achieved when they are as a child.
In-order to focus on positive or negative development most of them voice their opinions on negatives even am not the exception out of them.If parents keep on pressurizing the child, they tend to mentally ill. A last year survey perplexed every one that, the parents who is after their kids looks support for decision making and need a guide n their life. News channels and papers are often showing success stories which in fact leading to adverse ramifications on the society.
Keeping all the positive or negative aside its every parents responsibility to give freedom to choose, because its their dream to get success. No one cannot become impeccable person for the first time, give some time to each child to become a greater person
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- Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 56
- University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 89
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.Use your own ideas, knowledge and experien 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'giving the least'.
Suggestion: giving the least
...dians choose best schools in their town giving least priority to the money to taste the frui...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ttain a respect from their well beings. Some of the children was focuses by their immediate...
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Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the other competitor at their childs age , they even dream their kid to be the sam...
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Line 3, column 823, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...id to be the same. More noticeable thing we hear from most of their parents is im...
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Line 3, column 908, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'achieve'
Suggestion: achieve
...ing all their dreams which they did not achieved when they are as a child. In-order t...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...s even am not the exception out of them.If parents keep on pressurizing the child,...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one that, the parents who is after their kids looks support for decision making a...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...lity to give freedom to choose, because its their dream to get success. No one cann...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the first time, give some time to each child to become a greater person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80258899676 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44050113412 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2241683609 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121102912354 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486411064567 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458274620799 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886161683666 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299038074779 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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