In this materialistic world, aspects of choosing a life partner vary among young people. Some folks consider love to be the prominent in order to get married while others choose money. This essay will discuss both the views in details and provide evidence as to why it is logical to go with money rather than love.
Certain people believe that we should jump into this relationship by considering the love to be the first priority because it is hard to find a true love nowadays. Moreover, love, unlike money, is the permanent thing that never loses its value. Also, it can provide us both physical and emotional support, making us psychologically strong and confident. When there is love in a relationship, respect and happiness generates automatically. Thus, it is better to get married for love.
On other hand, another bunch of people are in favor of marrying based on money your partner possesses because nowadays, money is the only thing that can buy everything. In order to earn livelihood, money is important. Moreover, it plays a vital role to lead a luxurious life which is a dream of many people. In this contemporary world, love matters to nobody; only thing that matters is the money as everyone wants to live a life of high standards with huge bungalow, luxury cars, to shop from expensive stores, et cetera. So, one should choose money over love in case of marrying someone.
In conclusion, this essay explained both the views in details. However, in my opinion, money can buy love and happiness, but, love cannot buy anything without money. So it is indispensable to go for currency for betterment of yourself as well as your children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8480565371 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71008840367 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6968521682 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272081202241 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902453571205 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066137183199 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169401077285 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138616762981 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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